Class Activities: Look at the introductions and the conclusions of the personal essays we’ve read (PE Introductions Conclusions). Choose one as a model (or combine two) and revise your introduction and conclusion in A102 to make them more concise and effective.

Tonight’s Homework: (#10) Reread your best personal essay draft and pick three things you’d like to get feedback on. (For example, you might be worried about the conclusion or the title or the concision.) Re-share your personal essay with me with a comment on the top listing those three areas.

Questions, comments, suggestions? Contact me at jpowers [at] er9 [dot] org.

Today’s Bonus Question: Come to class and ask, “Should I reshare my paper if it’s ready for feedback?”